Peer Comment- Kevin Humphreys “Brian Eno”
First I want to say that I like this post a lot it was very
detailed but yet not too wordy. I must admit that it was hard to find something
that I didn’t like. After digging deep I did find one thing that bother me,
this was the formatting. The whole post looked jumbled and you didn’t take
advantage of using space. There were also some grammatical errors here and
there. Overall great job Kevin, I was really impressed with your post!
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